>Your about to be like a over inflated red balloon, now all that's needed is a pin...
Why not blue?
>I'm under you, on top of you, and to the sides of you,
That's gay
>The painful and heavy burden of your sins strikes the top of your heads like a powerful lightning strike, the immovable fate of death closes in on you on all sides, you know your time is up as you begin to dissolve into the sea of the damned. The panic starts to rise up as the air is slowly taken away from you, you look around for help but you aren't able to find anyone, you have been blinded by your own fear. The darkness of the abyss starts to envelop you as you fall into your graves!
Is this your fan fiction?